Post by Thetruemeep on Jul 25, 2019 3:59:29 GMT -5
Well, since there are a lot of Warrior Cat RPs going on, it gave me an idea.
I’m assuming you all know what Mary Sues are. Overpowered, cliche, “perfect” characters with no flaws. In this challenge, you’ll be making your own. Break every rule of OC creation, and make the most annoying-sounding cat possible. Give him/her an overdone appearance, one-dimensional personality, zero flaws, an awesome destiny centered around them, and whatever else you think could tie it together. Have fun with it! I can’t wait to see what Mary Sues you make.
Mary Sue Form:
Name (make it something long and overdone, like “Auroraglitter” or “Emeraldsunset”):
Rank (make it something overused, like a warrior, medicine cat, or deputy. Heck, make them a leader!):
Appearance (describe your cat in the most drawn-out, poetic way possible):
Clan (Put them in the two most overrated clans: Thunderclan or Shadowclan. If you put them in a made-up one, give it an overdone name):
Destiny (squeeze all of your creative juices out of your brain and make it as detailed and cliche as possible):
Post by ElementalCattailer on Jul 27, 2019 21:35:36 GMT -5
Name: Sapphirestar Gender: None Age: A billion years old Rank: Leader Apperance: White cat with black eys and rainbow stripes. They are sparkly and glowing. Clan: SapphireClan. Destiny: To take over the whole entire forest including starclan and the dark forest with their glitter crystal rainbow powers. They formed a kit out of life essence from cats they killed and a stone exposed to direct moonlight for a whole moon. They have a mate but plans to dump and kill him once their plan is done.
Appearance: He has a sleek, long black pelt that shines in the moonlight on a cloudless day. His eyes are red like blood, with licks of orange burning nothing but hate. His bone color is different to all cats. To his victims, it is bright orange. To his followers it a dark red. But to his enemies, it shines bright like the stars, blinding them. His claws are sharper than Srouges, and he has more than any other cat, for he has extra toes that aid him in battle.
Destiny: He is a loyal warrior to Bloodclan, and is Scrouge's son. He is the true Deputy of Bloodclan, and after Scrouge died, he gathered up everyone and made Bloodclan again. His father courage gave him a prophecy, saying that when the Bramble is sicked, Blood will rise again. He has been watching the Forest cats all his life, and now that Bramblestar seems sick, he is ready to strike. His father evilness keeps him alive, so he is ready to fight them despite his age. His new mate, Mapleshade, will help him.
lets get rekted together *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* click on them please! they will die if not!
Oh dear, I don't think I can top Shadowdreams xD But this post needs more love.
Name: Darkenedmoon Gender: Male Age: Older than time itself Rank: Medicine Cat Appearance: Darkenedmoon is a very large, muscular tomcat whose very appearance strikes fear into every cat's soul. His pelt is darker than night itself, making this tom seem as though he is made from shadows themselves. His eyes are like two brilliant pools of moonlight, shining with wisdom and understanding beyond the comprehension of the mortal cat. They change in color with the moon, from the brilliant white of the full moon to the inky blackness of the new. Clan: Shadowclan Destiny: He knows all, sees all, and can even read the minds of other cats. His destiny is to become the leader of ShadowClan, obviously by killing the deputy and leader and taking over amidst the chaos. He will then wage an unstoppable war against all other clans, taking all of the forest for himself.
Appearance: Galaxyopal is an amazingly beautiful she-cat with striking white fur that shines in the light, whiter than snow and softer than clouds. She has a long, elegant tail and soft, dainty paw pads. Her claws and fangs are pearly white and sharper than needles, helping her win any fight easily. She also gives off a faint, lovely aroma that charms any cat nearby. Her eyes are her most breathtaking feature; they come in a vibrant shade of brilliant amethyst purple, with small gold and silver flecks in them resembling stars in space. Her eyes were what gave her the name Galaxykit at her birth.
Clan: Thunderclan, but she renamed it Thundering Opal Clan
Destiny: Galaxyopal was born in Thunderclan as the strongest and wisest kit of them all. When she became a warrior, Thunderclan went in fierce battle with Shadowclan. Galaxyopal killed the Shadowclan leader in battle, and was deemed a hero to Thunderclan. Many males wanted her as their mate, including Firestar, but she rejected any advances aimed toward her. She challenged Firestar for his leadership and defeated him in honorable combat. She renamed Thunderclan as Thundering Opal Clan, and received the blessing of eternal youth and strength from Starclan. She was destined to unite all of the clans under the name of Galactic Opal Clan, and rule valiantly for generations to come.
Do not challenge my ability to make Mary Sues Name: Rainbowdust Gender: Yes Age: Eternally young and pretty Rank: leader Appearance: she’s young and pretty, a shade of light pink with pretty purple stripes in her pretty coat. Her eyes change colors between all the colors on the rainbow! She has no scars despite winning ever battle she’s been in, and never needs to take herbs to feel better! Clan: thunderclan, duh Destiny: she was born a normal kit, an only kit and the only one in the nursery, so all the clan adored her. Her first day as an apprentice she passed the assessment and was made a warrior, but in the middle of the ceremony they were attacked by shadowclan! She was the first to fight and killed their leader and medicine cat both, so Firestar decided to make her leader instead of him! Firestar also begged to be her mate, but she didn’t want someonebold like him, so she chose Jayfeather instead, and had their kits soon after Jeez that’s the worst thing I’ve written. I love it.
Post by OminousBlueBell on May 16, 2020 20:45:52 GMT -5
Name: Rainbow of Shimmering Glamour Gender: They're every single gender imaginable. Age: 6000 years old. Rank: Medicine cat and a leader! Appearance: They is a long, muscular fox and cat hybrid with a long fox tail and huge fox ears. They are a bright pink with deep blue splotches all along her chest and ears. They have rainbow eyes and tiny paws. They are sleek and has a huge, purple nose. They also have scars all along their hind legs. Clan: DestinyDustClan. Destiny: They fell out of a plane as a kit but miraculously survived because a hawk caught them. The hawk raised her, then introduced her to DestinyDustClan. There, they were prophesized to kill a horde of skunks and then die. She fulfilled that prophecy and then became leader as a dead cat. She was also granted eternal wisdom and strength. She then walked over to the Dark Forest and killed every single cat there. She cleansed the world of humans, killing them off one by one. She then extended her Clan to have every cat in the entire universe in her Clan. She was truly the best cat anyone had ever seen. She was so beautiful that every cat (both male and female) fell in love with her, and she married every single cat she met.
Appearance: A black silhouetted cat with a rainbow nose and rainbow insides on his ears. His tail tip is also rainbow. He has a scar over his eye. Very emo. Handsome.
Backstory: Raised as a kit, growing up in BloodClan. Fallenfaith took him to the clans, then dying dramatically in front of him. He got accepted into ThunderClan, then was a Dark forest warrior immediately after he got there in his dreams. Then he killed Talonclaw, the leader of the Dark Forest at 4 moons old!!!111! He then died, but became revived after StarClan had chosen him for a prophecy!!11 He went back to the Clan, receiving the deputy & leader rank for killing Talonclaw. He fell in love with the warrior Flameburn, and had many proposals for love. But he only wished for Flameburn. They got together, having 7 kits. Sparkkit, Starkit, Mudkit, Fallenkit, Applekit, Rainbowkit, and Emokit. They all lived happily ever after.