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Post by helpful cat on Feb 10, 2018 15:09:48 GMT -5
Sky's Fear or Night Demise/Triumph/Souls
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Post by Ana on Feb 10, 2018 15:46:15 GMT -5
I like ''Sky Fear'' Do you know anybody that can make warrior cats book covers fro me?
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Post by Deleted on Feb 10, 2018 16:52:26 GMT -5
Authentic or drawn?
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Post by Ana on Feb 10, 2018 17:29:08 GMT -5
I would like to see both
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Post by Deleted on Feb 10, 2018 18:06:43 GMT -5
I can do drawn covers, I usually doodle them from time to time. I know someone who might be able to do an authentic thing, but I have no way to contact them, and don't even know if they're still active.
I can draw a cover, but you'll have to tell me what you want it to look like.
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Post by Ana on Feb 10, 2018 18:28:04 GMT -5
thank you so much The background will be a willl be a rocky jungle kinda like this: compasslogicstock.deviantart.com/art/Rocky-Jungle-Stream-Landscape-389038572Sky kit is a light grey fluffy cat[looks like a Maine coon] with blue eyes Night kit is a pure black fluffy cat[also looks like a Maine coon] with green eyes I would imagine them staring at each other or sitting next to each other The title will be Sky fear [this will be on wattpad]
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Post by Deleted on Feb 10, 2018 18:58:59 GMT -5
Sky's Skies or Sky (Fear)
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Post by Ana on Feb 10, 2018 19:11:57 GMT -5
Fear
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Post by Deleted on Feb 10, 2018 19:12:32 GMT -5
No, Is it Sky's Fear, Skies Fear, or Sky Fear [EDIT] Nevermind, I already made it. Here it is.
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Post by Ana on Feb 11, 2018 6:41:17 GMT -5
Thank you this will probably be the cover for now,now to the difficult part, wriiting it gonna send the link when the chapter one is ready! Again thank you
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Post by Deleted on Feb 11, 2018 13:43:28 GMT -5
You're welcome. Tell me if you want me to fix anything or re-draw it.
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Post by Ana on Feb 11, 2018 14:06:27 GMT -5
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Post by Ana on Feb 11, 2018 15:57:06 GMT -5
Any opinions?
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Post by MintyEvergreen on Feb 11, 2018 20:18:26 GMT -5
If you ever need help on future covers, I would be glad to help! As for the story, it's interesting, but doesn't seem to have enough motives behind it. I like the idea?? but there's a few things that doesn't seem right/doesn't fit in. The idea of Skykit and Nightkit not fitting in doesn't make too much sense to me in this sense, maybe you should explain the culture of the clan more, make it seem like that they /really/ aren't apart of the clan and not just because a few cats dislike there personalities. Another thing is also the writing, the grammar is off, and some of the words are misspelled, though, this is only minor, and if you ever need a proofreader you can always ask me or some other people! c: This is only my opinion, and I only hope to make you a better writer, not to tear you down.
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Post by Ana on Feb 12, 2018 7:09:34 GMT -5
Nah. i am fine thanks for the critique,I actually write a kind of clans personalities and preferences,standards,etc but I accidentally deleted,and about he misspelling,English is not my first language but nobody in my language reads Warrior cats so...... Again thanks for the critique
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