Post by quisslequassle on Jan 7, 2018 11:59:42 GMT -5
Broken Promises
The harsh autumm wind returns once more
Brushes against the devitalizing trees
Whose tired leaves jump off to join the cold parade
Letting themselves get carried away to the unknown
Energetic kittens try their best to catch the wanderers
To return them to their weeping parents
But they just slip out of their silky paws
To continue along their invisible path
The older cats chuckle silently
Returning to their younger days
They remember the warm fur of their loving parents
And the cozy lint around their ears
But slowly the joyful recollection start to fade
And then the colourful memories of their childhood is completly gone
Leaving all but a baren, white wasteland
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The harsh autumm wind returns once more
Brushes against the devitalizing trees
Whose tired leaves jump off to join the cold parade
Letting themselves get carried away to the unknown
Energetic kittens try their best to catch the wanderers
To return them to their weeping parents
But they just slip out of their silky paws
To continue along their invisible path
The older cats chuckle silently
Returning to their younger days
They remember the warm fur of their loving parents
And the cozy lint around their ears
But slowly the joyful recollection start to fade
And then the colourful memories of their childhood is completly gone
Leaving all but a baren, white wasteland
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I just quickly want to thank everyone for reading this!
I don't show people my work very often and this is really a special opertunity for my. I am glad to have found a fanbase were I don't have to worry about how good I am, but I can develop on my own pace.
Of course, criticism is still always welcome.
Upcoming Poetry;
- The static speaks my name -
- Oxygen stealing ballons -
- The seasons race -
- The happy mournful rainclouds -
I am aware that a lot of these tiltes sound rather dark, but I assure that the poems are not against the current guidlines.
Thank you for checking out my work!
I don't show people my work very often and this is really a special opertunity for my. I am glad to have found a fanbase were I don't have to worry about how good I am, but I can develop on my own pace.
Of course, criticism is still always welcome.
Upcoming Poetry;
- The static speaks my name -
- Oxygen stealing ballons -
- The seasons race -
- The happy mournful rainclouds -
I am aware that a lot of these tiltes sound rather dark, but I assure that the poems are not against the current guidlines.
Thank you for checking out my work!
Great start you know how to keep the flow of the poem going really well. It's sad but meaningful ^^