Lace
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Post by Lace on Jan 13, 2018 18:15:00 GMT -5
Lol, the subs always felt so expensive to maintain. Most of the time I didn't bother. The ability to have custom poses was super neat though, some people had really epic ones. c:
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Fae
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Post by Fae on Jan 13, 2018 21:17:35 GMT -5
Have you ever felt like nobody was there? Have you ever felt forgotten in the middle of nowhere? Have you ever felt like you could disappear? Like you could fall, and no one would hear?
yeahhhh. that request was for 2 deltas which lasted quite a bit of time, but then my wifi went out so i havent been able to do more commissions. wifi only just got back on today
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Lace
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Post by Lace on Jan 13, 2018 21:32:48 GMT -5
Yikes, going without wifi sucks. Glad to hear it's back though. ;;
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Fae
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Post by Fae on Jan 13, 2018 21:34:19 GMT -5
Have you ever felt like nobody was there? Have you ever felt forgotten in the middle of nowhere? Have you ever felt like you could disappear? Like you could fall, and no one would hear?
yeahh...i was without wifi for over a week. granted it was, like, a week and a day but. that's a week and a day too long
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Fae
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Post by Fae on Jan 14, 2018 17:42:23 GMT -5
Have you ever felt like nobody was there? Have you ever felt forgotten in the middle of nowhere? Have you ever felt like you could disappear? Like you could fall, and no one would hear?
Requests are now open! Get your requests in quick y'all, i'm only doing three
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Fae
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Post by Fae on Jan 20, 2018 12:44:50 GMT -5
Have you ever felt like nobody was there? Have you ever felt forgotten in the middle of nowhere? Have you ever felt like you could disappear? Like you could fall, and no one would hear?new drawing! kinda proud of this one, though the pose is a lil weird cx same character as i've drawn before bc i love her
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TheMysticHeart
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Post by TheMysticHeart on Jan 21, 2018 7:26:21 GMT -5
Wow! I can see improvements, i’m so glad I helped you improve! Even if the pose is a liiiiiitle off, I think (hope) I speak for us both by saying that the pose you used was out of your comfort zone. (it’d be100% out of mine without the sketch-lines thing)
If I may, a few more pointers/nitpicks/constructive critiques
•Size
Criticism- Try to keep the leg size even in the back, the flanks are completely different sizes however in that position they should be only a little diferance in size between them Praise- the front left (character’s left, our right) leg is 100% perfect in almost every way, the shape, size, and curve are on point, and the only noticeable issue is that the paw is a bit long, but then again who am I to speak, I mean I do the exact same darn thing!
•Line-art
Criticism- some lines are curved in a way that makes the pose a little more unnatural than it could look. A perfect example is the right (character’s right, our left) leg is curved upwards, whereas if it were to curve downwards slightly, and kept the same paw shape, then It’d make the form a little more anatomically correct. Another thing is internal lines. The chest might look off to you because the legs don’t cut in to better define the chest, and instead it just looks like one big curve.
Praise: the lines are SO DARN SMOOTH I COULD DIE. Shure they might not be POSITIONED perfectly, but MY LINES ARE AS SKETCHY AS AN OLD GUY IN A DARK ALLEY ASKING TO USE YOUR PHONE -_- your lines are continuous, witch is something that I myself severely struggle with and would die for in my art. It takes a steady hand to get THAT smooth a line and DARNIT I WANT that skill XD
•Colour
Criticism- none. No rly the colouring is perfect and I can’t see anything wrong with it at all. Praise- as I said. Perfect.
(Also, just saying bc the last time I offered someone constructive criticism they tore up their work and started crying and I was like “ffffffffffffff....” {all I said was the head was too small tho} ) Any and all criticism given was for the purpose of improvement and advice. If I hurt your feelings a little, i’m Sorry, but I cannot really relate. I personally adore constructive criticism and would honestly rather it over a compliment just because they tell me what to improve on. My logic goes; ‘shure, saying that the nose I drew was perfect but i’m Never going to be able to draw a nose like that ever again, wereas telling me the left back leg looks too small I then know next time to compare the critiqued leg to a leg I am drawing and make shure the size differs’ so yee. I see constructive criticism like pointing out my errors, and pointless criticism like saying it sucks because it can.
OkI’mSorryI’llShutMyMouthAndLeaveNowKayThxBye ; - ;
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Fae
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Post by Fae on Jan 21, 2018 16:34:10 GMT -5
Have you ever felt like nobody was there? Have you ever felt forgotten in the middle of nowhere? Have you ever felt like you could disappear? Like you could fall, and no one would hear?
Ah, thanks for both the constructive criticism and praise cx i'll be honest, my lines usually arent this smooth. it...wasn't until i got SAI that they started getting so smooth cx and yeah, the hind legs (especially their right one, ugh) are so off...rip. maybe later i'll edit it some cx
and o man this was. so much out of my comfort zone but honestly? i love it
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TheMysticHeart
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Post by TheMysticHeart on Jan 21, 2018 16:49:00 GMT -5
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mossymeow
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I disappeared for about four months, but now I'm back
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Post by mossymeow on Feb 6, 2018 18:58:39 GMT -5
Love your art! Is that Sandtail that you drew?
Anyway, I need a good profile pic so...
Username: MossyMeow
Reference: Name: Briarback Personality: (optional) Pose: Sitting (front) Headshot/fullbody/bust/icon: Fullbody Publicly post full result/PM/both: Publicly post Other: She's one of my cats from MountainClan
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